Writing Goals

This term in Te Maunga we have created a google drawing of our writing goals we made a term 1, term 2 goal and we just made a  term 3 writing goals. We write narratives or recounts for showing evidence so the teacher knows that we have complete We add our walts to our presentation so the teacher knows what we are are trying to evidence. We also highlight the our goals then in our writing we check . We had to put down what we did not achieved  from last year WALT choose our own writing goals.

Term 2 Writing Goals

The beginning of term 2 we created a google drawing about our writing goals.I  haven’t achieved some goals from last Term so I had to put them on a google drawing. The WALT was to choose our own Goals for this year.  The Goals will help me in my writing.I want to achieve them this year so next year I learn new things for writing.

Coopers Beach Christian Camp

W.A.L.T. Mack pre and post slideshow about befor and after camp. we made a imovie about our camp and you can see it on youtube or on my links on my google

My learning map

Onomatopeia

W.A.L.T. improve our language features in writing by using Onomatopoeia

Metaphors

Haiku

Cinquain

I.A.L.T write a cinquain poem with five lines

Alliteration Relationship

Today we started to put Screencastify in the side and we all had a turn saying our parts. When we were saying our parts our voices had to be as clear as the water on a clear sunny day. Screencastify can be used in anything like the most coolest in the word.

W.A.L.T. write an alliteration describing a relationship between two creatures. We used a shared Google Doc to write our alliteration. In a shared Google Slide we had to add a background then inserted png images of the critters

Fractions

I.A.L.T find fractions of lengths
My Next step is to do more fractions

Exciting Sister's Birthday

                  Exciting Birthday For my Sister

Wow I just realised it was my sister’s birthday  today .  In my head I said, “I did not say happy birthday” so she said, “Did you forget about my birthday?”...

She walked quickly in my room,  “Hi Bella your brothers up”…Why would I want to know ...I have to say happy birthday. It just came out. “It’s not my birthday Bella.” “Yes it is, so look on the calendar!”  “Sorry you are right.” “Bye, we’re going to school.”

Before we went to school we sang happy birthday to her …   before I ran to the bus stop, we had a roughy roughy run. After  I ran home, my sister was not there they just came out over the bumpy bumpy car... The delicious smell of food was as hot as hot as soup.   

I.A.L.T. write a recount and edit it and use more exciting words and punctuation especially when people are talking.